Friday, May 31, 2013

Day 52 - Darwin's Game - Chapter 1 (1763 words)

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Darwin's Game

By Wayne Webb

CHAPTER 1


There was no return address on the envelope, there were no postmarks or stamps or any courier tags on the outside, just a plain A4 envelope, with thick card inside it about the size of a disc cover. Someone must have delivered it by hand, there was no note on his desk, no one let him know he had a package, but here a thing had arrived on his desk to his attention.

A mysterious envelope with anonymous heritage showing up on his desk was an almost daily occurrence, he put it on the pile for the interns to sort through and decide what would be bubbled up to the featured wall today.

Jacob Edgerton worked in a shared office space in San Francisco, not in the city but out in the Mission District, where it was a little cheaper and easier to get settled without outlaying a huge amount of money. He was getting by with a couple of staff helping him man the service he ran on the internet, a news aggregation and blog opinion hub where they tried to make sense of the news without bias. Or at least that was the plan when they started out.

Jacob and his partner Blake Hilliard had founded the site, “facts alone” out of a desire to not have to find their news in between jokes on the saitirical late night comedy programs that regularly embarrassed the 'actual' news media with more reasoned and balanced coverage, along with drug and dick jokes. So they started pulling news feeds and made their own news aggregation site that had a focus on data and information and no commentary.

They did not have reporters, they had themselves and some clever algorithms that helped them break stories down into just the facts that were verified or actual rather than couched opinions. They were probably left leaning if you had to put a label on them, but they also held some quite conservative views on crime and punishment. They disagreed on a a lot of things and the people who met them, wanting to label them or pigeon hole them found it hard to do it consistently as they were so very similar, yet poles apart. It made them a good filter for what they were trying to do.

News stories that came in through them went out in vastly reduced forms, they were boiled down to the facts only and they removed all the hyperbole and opinion that coloured almost everything that was consumed in mass market media. They and the generation they catered to, had just had enough of the language, the spin and the 'balance' that tipped dramatically one way or another. They found a corner of the market where people like them looked to see what was behind all the front and words that other news shows had. All emotive language was removed, disaster and tragedy were never used, nor were charged terms of judgement like heinous or evil. They took it the other way too and removed all the over hyped positivity like things that were 'once in a lifetime' or 'positively received' and anything that was not quantifiable was just not there.

It was not perfect but it was a start towards honesty and that resonated with a large section of younger viewers fed up with being sold news rather than being told it. That was their motto, when they printed business cards “Telling News, not Selling News.”

Jacobs bugbear was the phrase “some people say”, there was no hiding behind anonymous sources in Facts Alone, if you didn't want to say it publicly, then they would not be the mouthpiece for you. They did not accept press releases as news, they were instantly suspicious when stories found them instead of being found by them. Above all they wanted integrity and honesty back in the media.

That was why it was a day or so before an intern opened that envelope and found that there was a disc inside and that it needed to be seen straight away.

Jacob was talking to Blake over a coffee in the conference room they had booked for meetings in the shared office, they made time to meet once a week and review the most critiqued articles and feeds on their site. They had plenty of volunteers who for a small fee or a chance to access and be part of the new paradigm, assisted in the filtering and re-packaging of news back into facts. The more feedback they got from left, right and the audience they actually wanted, the more they sanity checked their approach. Pissing people off who thought they were being evil, or blind or plain stupid was perfect in their eyes. Provoking that kind of reaction usually meant that they were on the money. When words were charged and interpretable different ways they would examine them and add it to the learning dictionary that the software used to de-charge the copy of any bias. This worked because people wanted the facts, and when anything else crept in they protected it fiercely.

Susan was 19 and studying journalism, learning how to produce news during school hours, and learning to reconstruct it in her work hours. She stood in the doorway of the conference room and knocked on the door jamb to get Jacob's attention. She reported to Jacob, no one reported to Blake, because he was a grumpy and mean person to work for with a short temper and and ill humour. Blake was easily irritated into losing his temper and ranting at the drop of a hat. Jacob was easily irritated into finding a solution. Between them they had passion and logic for truth, they just found it on a different path to the same destination.

“What?” Blake had been in a dark mood since he had arrived, later than usual due to a car problem that only served to wind him up and take his temper out on everyone he met from that point of his day onwards. Jacob had seen him posting on social media all morning and knew that by the time that he presented at the office it would be all drama and noise, so he booked a hurried meeting, bringing it forward a day. Blake knew he was being a douche bag, but he was downing in the black mood and it was hard to not circle the drain. They knew each other well enough to yell and bitch and moan and think nothing of the words exchanged, but think of it as an emotional blood letting.

“Shut up dickhead. What is it Susie?” Jacob smiled at her and gave the finger to his business partner and friend who managed to scowl and smile simultaneously back at him.

“Um, I think you should see this.” Susie was holding the disc very carefully with a finger through the centre hole and one pinching the outer edge, like it was precious or dangerous, maybe both.

“I'll look at it afterwards, just leave it on my desk and I'll get to it soon. Thanks, Susan.” Jacob smiled wide knowing how much this annoyed his partner. Susan held the disc and did not move.

“He said he'll look at it later.” Blake growled but then he saw the look on her face and he knew something was up. Normally the interns and junior staff would blush or cringe when he acted like the way he always did, it took them a long while to realise that it was just his way of dealing with his anger an frustration, and how to deal with that themselves. Susan was still quite new and shy, while she felt very comfortable with Jacob, like everyone did, she was a long way from that with Blake, and he knew it, played on it and secretly enjoyed that impenetrable facade that made 90 percent of people leave him alone.

Susan's face was pale and white, like she was not going to cry because whatever it was that affected her was shocking not necessarily emotional, but shocking. She was having trouble processing something, and it was obviously a big thing. Blake may not have thought much of her in public, but in private he had thought her sensible and capable when pushed the right way. He had hopes for her being a future part of the Facts Alone if she could get over the shy part and just get on the with the job.

The pale, drained look though spoke volumes. Jacob saw it too, but it was Blake who now reached for the disc and looked at it.

It was a plain DVD disc, and written on it in permanent marker were the words “Darwin's Game” and the numbers “1.1”.

“Darwin's Game?” Jacob was reading the disc over Blake’s shoulder and then moved to turn the monitor on, connecting his laptop to the Wi Fi media server, connecting to the big screen. Blake handed over the disc after turning it up and back a few times looking for clues to content, but finding none.

“You better come see this you guys!” Susan yelled that to the office, and a few heads popped up and saw through the glass walls of the conference room that the bosses were there and putting something on the screen. Within a few minutes half the staff present were crowding the door with grins and eager looks on their faces, while Susan now looked like she was going to be ill. Blake and Jacob were sitting at the table while everyone else stood.

Susan pulled up a chair and sat between them both, cradled her head in her hands and peeked through her fingers at the screen waiting for it to play.

Jacob looked around the staff assembled. “Now unless you want to get a seriously loud “Shut the Fuck Up” from Blake here, you will want to keep your comments to yourself until afterwards.” A few of the people started to turn on tablets and notebooks to make notes as they went, this was not the first time they had been over a new story as a group, they were experience and this usually meant something juicy.

Blake took the remote and with a final glance at his business partner and the shaken intern he pressed play.

The screen was black, slowly the words faded into view.

“Darwins Game.”

They faded away again, then a second title else came on screen.

“Episode 1.”

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