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BABEL
By Wayne Webb
CHAPTER 16
The pain in Philip's abdomen
was throbbing through his veins, an acid drip attached to his body
and getting inside his skin with a regular recurring beat. It seared
into him and he could find no relief from the pain. He had been
walking down the ramp of a spaceship, that alone had been miraculous
and amazing enough, but then a bolted force of pure energy belted him
off his feet and knocked him over, the excruciating-ness of it
blurred his vision and changing his sense of which way was up.
An age ago he had been on an
errand with Emily, and then he woke up somewhere else and found all
these other people just like him, and they connected. He could think
of another way to put it, like they were mentally looped together, a
networking loop. They connected on some psychic and physical level,
that string from person to person, mind to mind. The instant he
touched another person in that place, he connected completely with
them, could see what they saw in their mind, feel what they felt
emotionally and physically, and could understand them and what they
thought from their perspective. He knew that this was reciprocal, he
could feel, sense them having the same negotiation with Philips
thoughts, feelings and memories while he was trying to process
theirs. Then they had broken apart, touched another person and
assimilated them and all their connections, like a virus spreading,
like cell division, each time it was growing exponentially.
The bond was keenest with
the first people he touched, Susan at the foremost of those. As each
progressive touch multiplied itself out he was soon in contact with
thirty six people by only meeting two more people. His mind thought
it was going to crack, but his brain handled it just to easily, like
it was made for it. The personalities and emotions in his head were
orderly and made sense, like looking at a row of books on a shelf, he
had instant access to every page when he needed it, or when a piece
of information was being shared by another person in the loop, but
not everything was just open all the time. All the information had
rushed in and sat there, ready to be accessed, instantly known but
not all recalled in the same blink of the eye.
Now there were thirty six people
milling about, and Susan was always very close to him, he could tell
where everyone was at any given time and could feel the same as they
did, but it was like the volume was turned up on Susan, slightly less
on Darren and James, but still louder than the thirty three others in
his head, of which oddly he was one. Somewhere in there he was
archiving and accessing his own thoughts and feelings from the new
mental library he had constructed.
He was still hungry, he had felt that
keenly and wished for food and something to to drink. Feedback poured
into him, twenty seven of his fellow Loops which was a word one of
the others had come up with and the majority of them accepted as an
acceptable term for this odd upgraded mental faculty they had. They
had all been silent in the time since the Babel, and this new found
ability to instantly bridge the communication gap was mind blowing
and outrageously freeing. It was also one hundred percent truthful
and factual. Already he knew things about all of the people in the
loop, he could feel guilt and pain in equal measure.
They had no time for judgement, they
had a job to do though not one of them knew what it was, all of the
Looped together people knew that a job was assigned to them by their
benefactors. It was on this thought that they all moved in a motion
towards the centre of the corridor, where a door lead away from the
row of rooms, or cells where they had been kept up until this point.
They felt trusted, safe and secure here but not all of them agreed
why they were, or who was holding them here. At least they were not
fearful or paranoid, despite some of the Looped being openly
suspicious of the motives of their captors, hosts or whatever they
were. Their emotions were levelled out, and on some level they
realised this was imposed, but they did not care, or could not care
that much about it other than academically.
The central door that lead away from
that area drew them to a large window, or screen, it was hard to know
which it was, and Philip and Susan could both see the view before
they came across it. They had a preview, as they all did, from the
person in the front of the group walking ahead, they all saw foggily
in their mind what that person saw, it was taking priority over other
peoples views of the backs of their own heads and other useless
information, though it was all there together in a useless lump until
sifted someday into a useful order.
There was a breakfast table
set for thirty six people, with human food and drink laid out to each
persons individual specification and needs. Philip new where to sit
without being told, like everyone else in the room did as well. They
sat in view of the window, the floor to ceiling view of Auckland
Harbour and City skyline at night. It was night time, it was dark and
no one knew really what was happening, but breakfast was appropriate
when they thought they had woken up in the morning, but now they
discovered it was night. The timing was off and what followed that
thought was a sweeping round disappointment and annoyance, and a
request for them to close their eyes.
When Philip opened them
again he was lying head sideways on the table, and he opened his eyes
to see thirty six other first views of the day. The day, it was now
daylight outside and time had passed, it was just after dawn and the
meal in front of them was now appropriate to the time of day. The
previous sweeping external emotion, not from within the Loop but
coming from outside it, was the complete opposite of what they felt
now. The rightness of the timing, the satisfaction at having the
right meal, the right time and the right exact food for them all at
this time was uplifting and smug at the same time. Philip smiled as
he ate his bacon and eggs, still hot or maybe created anew, he didn't
know one way or the other, but there it was perfectly done just how
he liked it. He had freshly squeezed grapefruit juice where others
had coffee, tea or other beverages or food to their personal tastes.
Everyone around the room was
happy and content, even those with the thoughts that this was a trap,
a convenience, a trick on them. The morning passed with a casualness
and ease with nothing really happening. They all knew each other
already, conversation was impossible anyway as they were still Babel,
but now they had no need for language at all so the lack of speech,
reading or other media was neither here nor there. They waited until
the sun was high in the sky and the day had progressed, taking seats
again for lunch and this time being fully awake, saw it materialise
in front of their very eyes.
It was like a scene from
Star Trek with the replicator technology, more than one person
thought this as they saw the food fade into existence from thin air
or beamed in from somewhere else and again exactly what they wanted.
Philip had been craving Fish and Chips, he felt one of the other
Looped thinking about the Fish Shop in Devonshire Street, in Sydney,
Australia and that memory had been so vivid an compelling Philip felt
like he had been there, tried the food an craved it. Others around
the table obviously had similar feelings as various fast food
servings were replicated down the packaging and accompanying sodas
appeared along side them.
There were thirty six
different tastes overlapping and being catered to and seemingly by
magic from an unseen and unheard host. Now they were all thinking
Host, the food had clinched the deal for them. They were prevented
from panicking by an emotional brake inside them, but they felt
incredibly free to think whatever they wanted, including negative
opinions, theories and conspiracies but they only were restricted by
not be able to react, potentially over reacting to any thoughts.
They ate in silence in the
room, save the smacking of jaws and saliva in the act of consumption
itself, but in their minds they were singing joyfully of food and
satisfaction, the sensation that the things they lost were able to be
brought back even this once. They stopped when they were full,
thoughts of having more while they still could were being suppressed
or squashed, even though they knew this was likely for their own good
to prevent despair or a needle in the sense of hope they were
building up.
They all felt fantastic, and
Philip could see Susan across the table, looking over her head to see
the view, and take in the breathtaking vista from the city to the
Bridge. He saw it first, but she could co-see it with him as he saw
the flare and they all heard the faint crump of the explosions and
then the collapse of the bridge. At this distance they could not see
the people on the bridge, they could not have known the human cost of
what they were seeing, but they were all taken aback by the fiery and
devastating change to the Auckland land mark. Philip was from the
mainland, and as such he held no commonality with Aucklanders prior
to being here and meeting them, being Looped to some of them and
beginning to know them intimately. Even so he knew before they
transmitted their shock that this was a big thing, the visible icon
of their city terrorised in this way.
They knew it was terrorised,
or attacked, the bridge itself was static and could not simply
implode or explode without an incendiary device to bring it down.
There was a builder who had worked demolitions before in the thirty
six Looped and he shared the thought that the blast pattern betrayed
a timed, planned demolition, a bombing for maximum effect. They all
watched the blast with some pity and surprise and from their position
above Rangitoto, a few of them had figured this out from the height
and angle of the view they had out the window of the spaceship that
they had previously seen hanging in the Auckland sky either above the
Manukau or above the extinct volcanic island in the Gulf.
They had been there another
day of waiting, meals and a dubious sense of well being keeping them
fed and not so much entertained as OK with having nothing to do at
all. Then they got the instructions to head to the shuttle bay, they
were going to land and Loop in a whole country full of people in one
go.
The instruction was not a
voice, nor was it a picture but it was knowledge directly imparted
into them. They saw the craft in their future, and how to find their
way to it in their memory as if they had walked it a thousand times
before. They saw the growing throngs of people standing in pairs and
then them walking out and touching the first thirty six pairings,
then like a virus contaminating the entire population they could see
the Babel in the Loop with them.
The flight was smooth and
silent and they waited patiently to land feeling the thud as gravity
and dry land reacquainted themselves with the craft and it's
occupants again. They filed up in a four person line and walked out
of the shuttle together, Darren, James, Susan and Philip together and
they had eight more rows of four people behind them, ready to all
split up and touch one person in the first thirty six pairings they
could find near the Queens Wharf entry and start the Looped In
processing.
Then it hit. Then the two
bullets tore into Susan and James, flinging their bodies and spraying
blood everywhere near the entry points. Philip felt the pain from
both of them and as everyone else was running for cover and diving
off the Shuttle ramp, he and Darren were consumed with the intense
pain from the flesh of their first pair being brutally invaded by
hot, searing and jagged metal shots.
First James stopped hurting
as he stopped breathing and the pain lessened, and Darren came to and
ran off the ramp, diving for cover. Philip held on to Susan, the bond
not being any more or any less intense once the initial connecting
had been accomplished, but the physical pain was nothing now, a dull
and aching pin prick compared to the hungry black maw that opened up
for her as Philip felt her die from the inside out.
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